Avoiding Gender Bias in Writing
Until fairly recently, many texts made use of the masculine he or him to refer to individuals in certain professions or subject positions. This tendency has, in some cases, carried over into student writing. Furthermore, given the fact that our work is not made up exclusively of males, avoiding gender bias in one's academic work is very important.Here is an example of a gender-biased sentence:
When a student
does not plan ahead effectively, he
may face problems with time management that will be reflected in his academic work.
This sentence incorrectly assumes that all hypothetical students are male. This is obviously no longer the case.
Fortunately, there are a number of techniques that writers can use to remedy this problem:1. Use plural form
do not plan ahead effectively, they
may face problems with time management that will be reflected in their
This sentence does not assume that all students are male or female.2. Get rid of the gendered pronounA
student who does not plan ahead effectively may face problems with time management which will then be reflected in the student's
This form can sound "clunky" in some contexts, but it avoids the issue of gender bias.3. Use both HE and SHE by replacing a gendered pronoun with HE or SHE
When a student does not plan ahead effectively, he or she
may face problems with time management that will be reflected in his or her
Like option two, this option may be clunky or wordy in certain contexts; use it with caution! This option works best with shorter sentences where the pronouns will not be repeated.
|GrammarBank Video Exercises (New!)|